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My Love for You

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Not once in my life
has there ever been
No emotion so strong
that even I could not give in

but here it is now
and it is my own
my love for you
by each passing day has grown

And now this emotion
is the truest of true
for it just so happens
my knight in shinning is you

How couldn't I love?
Love such a face
your soul, it's beauty
unheard of perfection and grace

No words man made
could ever describe
and a love like this
no amount of money could bribe

So how much you ask
do i love thee?
but to ask shows
you truly can not see

ask then how many grains,
of sand does the desert hold
like my love for you
no one can acurately be told

Only can you feel
and know it's there
my love for you
is the sweetest of all air

my love for you...... is beyond compare
this is one of those peoms where it came out nicely and flowed pretty well
but when i tried to perfect the structre a bit it went to hell lol
no seriously im not that great when it comes to structure so i tried to practice on a poem i was working on
i dont remember how i originally had it so i have to go with mottos " oh well" and "the show must go on"
so here it is *drum roll*
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Tenejs-inblue's avatar
This is a great poem...I love its rhythm and your words have substance. nicely done! :flirty: